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FSN Tickling Fic: Fun at Illyas (F/FF, FFF/FF)
All of these events take place in an alternate reality concerning the Fifth Holy Grail War, separate to any of the three canon routes. Part 1: Captives of the Einzberns Rin awoke in discomfort, groggy and dazed. The black-haired girl’s eyes opened slowly, her vision blurred, so it took her some time before she could take in her surroundings. This was also partly down to the fact that the room she was in was fairly dark; as her eyes adjusted, it appeared that she was in a dungeon of some sort. The sole source of light was through three small, rounded windows on the wall, the only openings to the outside world. Ahead of her was a single, wooden door; the room appeared barren of all else except for a basic table and chairs. Or so Rin thought, until she heard a muffled voice to her right. Turning, she noticed, to her surprise, a bound Saber, who had apparently awoken some time before her. The honourable servant had been stripped down to a white bra and panties, with her arms tied
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Medea's Prize (A Fate/Stay Night Tickle Story)
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It was a long battle, but it had finally reached its end.
The Holy Grail War ended with one sole victor. But it wasn’t the Tohsaka girl, nor the redhead that possessed the ability to project swords. The later had long since perished, and the former…
No, the winner of the Holy Grail War was none other than one of the very beings it was responsible for summoning in the first place.
Caster.
With her broken ability to steal magical contracts, thanks to her Rule Breaker dagger, she went ahead with tearing up the war. Lancer, Berserker, Rider, Archer and Assassin were helpless once Caster invoked t
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Unlimited Slave Works Part 2: Illya's Victim(CMSN)
It wasn’t very often she was invited to Rin’s house. Honestly she was fairly certain this was some kind of trap by the way the Master was avoiding being specific. But the allure of what was promised to be a fantastic prize just seemed to be to much to turn down. Sure there was a risk tied to it, but what great things in life didn’t have a risk right? Walking through the heavy iron bars of the Tohsaka estate into the beautiful garden on the other side. Part of her detested this house for the name stake alone, but she had come to enjoy Rin’s company in the past couple of days.
Knocking on the door the distant sound of
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I don't know the history of any of the characters in this story, nor do I recognize the author, but I read the story and see that a request for a critique has been made.
I thought the story was very entertaining. No doubt those readers who find tickling to be erotic will find that aspect of the story quite fulfilling as the descriptions of the tied characters and their helplessness to avoid a good tickling of their exposed soles was very well described.
One technical issue with the writing that I would respectfully like to address is the punctuation at the end of a spoken sentence. Take, for instance, the sentence "He just left for Sakira's place." Saber informed her.
If you look at that, you'll see that Saber informed her. is actually a sentence by itself, and by itself it means nothing. There should be a comma in there instead of a period because both sentences are really part of the same sentence.
"He just left for Sakira's place," Saber informed her.
Check out any book on your bookshelf and you'll see that this is correct.
Other than that minor issue, great offering! I suspected the twist at the end but it was still fun to read what Shirou saw when he entered the room.