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Well once again I have written something I never done before, a love X love story which I think I did pretty good job on it. This was requested by :iconcloudred1988: where he wanted to see Naruto and Fuu meet up and eventually end in the bedroom.

I hope you enjoy cloud.


As always, read, comment and fav.

-ED3765

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

It was okay. The story was told rather well considering who long this thing is in general and I feel like you got all of the characrters perosonalitys right.

However when it came to the sex scene I have to say.....That is easily the shortest one I have ever read in my life. Now im not saying it was done badly it was jsut too short for my tastes.

But seeing as how this is more about the love story than the lemon I have to say you did a good job. The sex scene length is the only issue I had.