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Fiction by hollywoodozzy1

DID by Dragon-Cana-Love


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December 7, 2012
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Keiko yawned loudly as she rose out of her bed at the dead of night. She pulled back the covers to reveal herself wearing Pink Blouse and Black underwear and got out of bed rubbing her eyes.

"I hate nightmares." Keiko said with a yawn as her dream was not one of her best and there was dark feeling that was plaguing her. As she made her way to the kitchen to get a glass of water she suddenly froze in her walking as she came face to face with two large strong looking men.

Both men grinned as they silently walked towards her and Keiko with a terrified look slowly backed away.

"No, no, stay away, HEEELLLPHHRPRMRM!" She began to scream before both men were on top of her wrapping a long piece of tape over her mouth and she began to punch and kick at them and in the process she knocked off a nearby wall phone off the hook. "Mrmprhprm!" She shouted behind her gag as one of her attackers ripped the phone cord and used it to bind her wrists behind her back.

"Nrnrpmrpmrmmmph!" She grunted through her gag as she began to kick at them furiously which had no effect on them.

"Let her go!" A man shouted as he came running down with a iron baseball bat.

"Mrhrprmpm!" Keiko grunted out upon seeing her father.

"How about you let go of that bat?" One of the attackers said as they held up a high powered stun gun next to Keiko and turn it on for a moment which flashed with a power electricity.

"What do you want?" Keiko's father asked lowering the bat.

"We hear there is a nice safe here. Drop the bat and take us to it." The attacker ordered.

"And you won't harm us?" He asked.

"We will not harm one hair." The attacker promised which caused Keiko's dad to drop the bat and one attacker finished binding Keiko's ankles with duct tape while the other was lead to the safe.

"Mmrmprhrpm." Keiko grunted as she started at the burglar with a fearful face before hearing a struggle in the next room. "Rmrmprhpm?" She moan with fear as the burglar grinned.

"Guess we got in the safe he said." The attacker said as he pulled out a small device with a timer on it and strapped it to her lower belly area with the last of the tape and turned it on which ticked down from thirty minutes.  

"MRNrnrpmr!" Keiko gasped out with wide eyes as she furiously grunted at her attacker.

"Hey, we said we wouldn't harm a hair. Didn't say anything about a bomb though." He said with a wide grin as his partner returned holding a full sack.

"Lets go." His partner said rushing out.

"Well, enjoy your last half hour." The attacker said as he pushed Keiko to the ground and quickly left the house.

"Mrmrphrprnpm!" Keiko yelled out for her father several times with no reply back not even a grunt or moan. Keiko could only watch helplessly as the clock ticked down to zero and being late at night there was no hope of rescue.

The end.
A simple request from :iconjankacperek111: where he wanted keiko from Yu Yu hakusho to once once again have a blast of an ending.

I hope you like.

As always, read, comment and fav.



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shadow785 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You would think Keiko would be used to this by now...
ED3765 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
you would think.
RopesNGags Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Loved it x3
MegaElekid947 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Love it love it so much. Em do you know the clone wars.
ED3765 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
MegaElekid947 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Do you know of Darth Maul and Savage oppress?
ED3765 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
yes, I've watched all the seasons plus bits of the 6 movies.
MegaElekid947 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
coud I ask a request with them and padme.
Metylover2143 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
*Yawns* Good Morning
ED3765 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
morning, but night here :p
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